Infuriatingly bad:

Despite having ruined her own laptop, her sister's laptop, and the library's computers, not to mention Steven and Brian's afternoon, she takes full credit for her game design— only to get extra credit and decide she's an awesome computer engineer! "I did it all by myself!"

hilarious.  i got such a good laugh out of the comments at the end!  "the obligatory guy with the popped collar tells you that this story was written by... an idiot, but i can't determine if it was a man or a woman."

or when the two commenters are discussing the cords and where they are plugged in... like the bezel... the ps1... the printer.  oh lordy!!  tears!!!

Yeah, those commenters really don't hold back. Happy they made you happy. :)